While I don't agree with your view regarding the classification of this piece as a sales pitch -- it's infused with variable value proposition statements, it do

While I don't agree with your view regarding the classification of this piece as a sales pitch -- it's infused with variable value proposition statements, it doesn't detract from the core message -- I share your sentiment that PG is one of the leading experts in the world of startup accelerators. Regarding your suggestions, I don't think that this listicle-heavy Buzzfeed type of writing suits PG. I'm more drawn to his abstract and enigmatic writing style.