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Sort of. If you remove semicolons and use periods, you have to remove the ‘that’ as well. Then, to me, the sentence loses its impact. Theres a parallelism that
by sseagull 4y ago
Sort of. If you remove semicolons and use periods, you have to remove the ‘that’ as well. Then, to me, the sentence loses its impact. Theres a parallelism that is artistic, and makes everything flow.
But in some sense this is art, not science; it shouldn’t be analyzed too much :)
- denton-scratch 4y ago> But in some sense this is art, not science; it shouldn’t be analyzed too much :) I thought we were discussing law, not art. If legal drafting is to be compared with art, only art experts will gain.
- sseagull 4y agoI suppose that's true. Got a little sidetracked there :) Agree when it comes to law - utility trumps art.