I'm surprised to find that I actually laughed out loud, midway through watching the edits. I didn't expect to find humor in the rewriting process. And a lesson

I'm surprised to find that I actually laughed out loud, midway through watching the edits. I didn't expect to find humor in the rewriting process. And a lesson I got from the edit that made me laugh: don't tell people what you're not saying, just tell them what you're saying. (Or, more succinctly: Don't equivocate.)