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Yeah, I doubt it ever will be. Reading some of these before/afters gives me hope, though: https://www.plainlanguage.gov/examples/before-and-after/ https://www.
by lelandfe 4y ago
Yeah, I doubt it ever will be.
Reading some of these before/afters gives me hope, though: https://www.plainlanguage.gov/examples/before-and-after/ https://www.plainlanguage.gov/examples/before-and-after/
Before:
> This form will be used by Federal agencies to obtain applicant certification that States which have established a review and comment procedure in response to Executive Order 12372 and have selected the program to be included in their process, have been given an opportunity to review the applicant’s submission.
After
> If your State requires an opportunity to review your application, use this form to certify that you have done so. Include the form in your application.
- pas 4y agoWhat does "requiring an opportunity to review" mean? :o Does the process include a review by the state or not? If yes it's mandatory, right? Not an "opportunity", and it's not just a "movie review" review, right? So it means state needs to approve it, no? So shouldn't this be phrased as "include government permit here (whether it's applicable for you, see how your state reacted to Executive Order 12372)"?