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Overall, I like the idea and appreciate the work you've put into it. I think it can be improved by simplifying a bit. Perhaps, rather than thinking of the page
by xwowsersx 4y ago
Overall, I like the idea and appreciate the work you've put into it. I think it can be improved by simplifying a bit. Perhaps, rather than thinking of the page as a full replacement for your resume, you might think of it as a quicker pitch. You could then include a link or attachment to the full resume. To that end, I think you should reduce the word count because it's a bit of a wall of text right now. Also, given the grid layout, I'm not sure where to focus my attention. So I think less words and a more streamlined design would help. Also, the images you've used seem a bit like an afterthought — not clear for example why the first bullet is a mobile phone.