Its an interesting article and while I didn't have the time to think the topic through - so I will not share my thoughts on the subject - there are some points

Its an interesting article and while I didn't have the time to think the topic through - so I will not share my thoughts on the subject - there are some points in it, which I will definetly think about. What I must say though, while the article is interesting, it certainly does not feel well written to me. While I am not a native speaker, I consider myself a fairly good english reader at this point. Still I found the language chosen to be very inaccessible. To me it felt like some words and phrases where deliberatly chosen to sound smart. To understand some of the paragraphs, I had to look up so many words that I had to start over reading, because I lost context. I think this topic could benefit from some more simple english.