Might I suggest elaborating on the incoherence. This reads as a summary of points and then simply exclaiming “incoherent!”. To summarise alternatively, if you

Might I suggest elaborating on the incoherence. This reads as a summary of points and then simply exclaiming “incoherent!”. To summarise alternatively, if you can’t get it in this life, don’t pretend you can, and instead find hope in the next. Given how little we know about consciousness and what happens to it, it’s not technically incoherent. Possibly not provable but not incoherent either.