Let me be the first sourpuss to say that "Get your shit in order" is a bit jarring for a headline. In order to use a phrase like that, I think you need to bala

Let me be the first sourpuss to say that "Get your shit in order" is a bit jarring for a headline. In order to use a phrase like that, I think you need to balance it with something that offsets the shock, and you don't have so much as a screenshot of what you want me to register for. "Get your shit in order" doesn't build the trust necessary to let you have access to my information. Your landing page copy also talks about what your product shouldn't be used for (keeping kids "on top of their chores") which basically eliminates a common use case before registration, but it's really vague on what it is you're offering me.