Your copy needs a bit of work. > "Do you ever wondered why don't you reach your personal goals, although you try?" I'm not sure where you're going with that q

Your copy needs a bit of work. > "Do you ever wondered why don't you reach your personal goals, although you try?" I'm not sure where you're going with that question, but it's all over the place. > "Do you want to know how much do you sleep on average?" This makes somewhat better sense as: "Do you want to know how much you sleep, on average?" Although it's not a very gripping question. It could definitely lose "on average".