Yes that font is much better over the cursive one, both in terms of readability and cleanliness. If you do use any cursive fonts, please do not bold the letter

Yes that font is much better over the cursive one, both in terms of readability and cleanliness. If you do use any cursive fonts, please do not bold the letters as everything looks mashed together. Other than that, everything looks great and the offer sounds generous! Good luck!