Thanks for taking the time to read over it and providing that feedback. Admittedly I'm not the most well versed in copy-writing and will do as you suggested to

Thanks for taking the time to read over it and providing that feedback. Admittedly I'm not the most well versed in copy-writing and will do as you suggested to get someone who is to read over it in detail. How did you find the overall structure and contents of the page? Did you find it was clear at conveying the messaging? Cheers.