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I presume this is a hobby / solo effort? Unfortunately there are grammar errors throughout this page. E.g. the heading "Your communities place to connect" sho
by midenginedcoupe 4y ago
I presume this is a hobby / solo effort?
Unfortunately there are grammar errors throughout this page.
E.g. the heading "Your communities place to connect" should be "Your community's place to connect".
In fact, reading through more of it, it comes across as if English is not your first language? It would be worth it to find someone to copy-edit all your content.
- dsir 4y agoThanks for taking the time to read over it and providing that feedback. Admittedly I'm not the most well versed in copy-writing and will do as you suggested to get someone who is to read over it in detail. How did you find the overall structure and contents of the page? Did you find it was clear at conveying the messaging? Cheers.