If you can break a paragraph into bullet points do it! People don't want to read what looks like a wall of text, but will happily jump to a nice convenient lis

If you can break a paragraph into bullet points do it! People don't want to read what looks like a wall of text, but will happily jump to a nice convenient list of things. People that enjoy Pynchon are a trivial percentage of the population. Good communication requires understanding what the target audience will actually pay attention to. It's a tightrope.