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Could use some editing to reduce the occurrence of "I".
by dboreham 4y ago
Could use some editing to reduce the occurrence of "I".
- 2143 4y agoNo doubt spf13 is a very smart and capable person. But the excessive use of "I" does stick out. In my culture (where spf13 is not from), excessive use of "I" is considered a sign of arrogance. That's probably just cultural difference though. He might really be a nice humble person :)
- waynesonfire 4y agodoes it help that the title is in third person?
- mrfox321 4y agoI mean... the lead-in photo screams narcissism.