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Hi, your copy is really confusing. I didn't understand what your business did until I read the comment here on HN. My suggestions: Your H1 copy should be some
by coryl 15y ago
Hi, your copy is really confusing.
I didn't understand what your business did until I read the comment here on HN. My suggestions:
Your H1 copy should be something that tells me exactly what you do and how it benefits me. Ex: "Save $$$ on long distance calls to anywhere in North America"
Your H2 could then be: "Phonerifique is a pre-paid phone service with rates as low .05c/min! Call anywhere in the US and Canada for cheap."
Good luck!
- gawker 15y agoHi, Thanks for your feedback. I realized that I was rash in just putting up the copy. You and several other people have also mentioned that didn't get what's going on. I'll definitely have to spend some time to work on it and I'll definitely look into your suggestions and post an update.