Honestly you have the right perspective, but you can leave out calling on the "first pillar" of security, what I want people to realize is that security isn't t

Honestly you have the right perspective, but you can leave out calling on the "first pillar" of security, what I want people to realize is that security isn't the most important thing at all, it's just a competing concern amongst a number of others, one of those being actually useful for what you need.