> This paragraph is exceedingly unclear That's putting it mildly. Based on the writing, my best career advice to this person would be to take a community coll

> This paragraph is exceedingly unclear That's putting it mildly. Based on the writing, my best career advice to this person would be to take a community college English composition class and/or join the local Toastmasters. Extra time spent working on communication skills almost always pays off more than extra time spent on technical skills.