I agree with the tone of your suggestions, but your suggestions still take quite some time to read. They can easily be shortened without losing any information.

I agree with the tone of your suggestions, but your suggestions still take quite some time to read. They can easily be shortened without losing any information. For example, no need to to apologize for being the process person (being overly apologetic decreases the value of apologies anyway). Also for me it feels like you're seeing code reviews as a senior/junior thing. It's more than that, no?