Can you explain (rather than state) what readability issue you think exists here? I don't know if you see a real readability issue or not, but I do think it's

Can you explain (rather than state) what readability issue you think exists here? I don't know if you see a real readability issue or not, but I do think it's easy to jump to "hard to read" when that's only true in a certain parochial sense: it's not what we're used to.