I also find his writing very unnatural and hard to read. It makes me seriously doubt his method, which he claims he's been using for twenty years. The first th

I also find his writing very unnatural and hard to read. It makes me seriously doubt his method, which he claims he's been using for twenty years. The first thing that stood out to me was the robotic nature of his writing. It seems like he's going so far out of his way to remove "unnecessary" words from sentences, and remove "unnecessary" sentences from his paragraphs, and to stringently vary his sentence lengths, that he winds up writing unnatural language. If you write in a way people aren't accustomed to, your readers are going to have a harder time understanding you. "Sometimes short. Sometimes long." "Cut three lines. Paste them up above." This isn't how English is used.