It might be great ... but I hate video at the best of times, and I'm trying this out when other people are around and I don't have headphones. You might want t

It might be great ... but I hate video at the best of times, and I'm trying this out when other people are around and I don't have headphones. You might want to consider having the text on that landing page, with a couple of photos and diagrams to help make the point. You need to have the lighting not reflecting in your glasses. Looking at the subtitles, I can see that English is not your first language. It's good and understandable, but you need someone to help you word-craft your script. It needs to be paced better, and it needs some "light and shade" in the presentation. I know it's short, and that's good, but it needs more "punch" and more "relax". (pause) OK, I've now listened, and you need a setting with less echo ... simply hanging up some blankets in the surrounding area might do enough, but it sounds very "empty office". It would be useful to have something in the background that's not just "blank". The website itself looks slick, but there's not much there, and it's not clear what I'm supposed to do next. This all sounds very negative, but you've got something up, which is better than 99.9% of people, and I've tried to make my comments actionable. Good luck!