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This looks super fun! Congrats on the release and hope you continue to grow the game though early access. Just for fun took a stab at rewording the game descri
by bcjordan 4y ago
This looks super fun! Congrats on the release and hope you continue to grow the game though early access.
Just for fun took a stab at rewording the game description following some tips I saw in a GDC talk on Steam store pages years ago, feel free to use any pieces if helpful. I'll try to find that talk link when I'm at a computer, it had some nice tips around not leading with a game category but rather very specific flavor hooks.
> Colonize, then mechanize! Land your crew of sea-stranded survivors in an exciting natural paradise... and survive! Build, explore and exploit the local environment to truly thrive. Can you automate your way to a space-faring industrial civilization? Or will every last settler perish at your hands...
- iliketrains 4y agoNice! I will definitely watch the talk and take a look at your example! Thanks!
- stevage 4y agoGood call, I also thought the description was a bit weak, and not super enticing.
- scotty79 4y agoI think this kind of game sells by the word of mouth. When I saw trailers of Factorio it didn't look attractive to me at all. I'm not sure how I decided to try it (maybe even I read recommendations here, on HN?), but then hundreds of hours of fun.