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Neat stuff, qrush! Some feedback: the order in which you introduce the concepts on the page seems backwards. You're starting with the "how" and ending with the
by nzadrozny 15y ago
Neat stuff, qrush!
Some feedback: the order in which you introduce the concepts on the page seems backwards. You're starting with the "how" and ending with the "why."
I know this is just an MVP and you're focused on the tech types, but I, for one, had to read the page more than once to really 'get it.'
My humble suggestion:
1. Set the context with the Siri screenshot, which iPhone 4S users will recognize. ("Okay, I get this. We're sending a text with Siri.")
2. Next, demonstrate the value with the SMS-and-response screenshot. Hook the imagination. ("Wow, that's cool! How can I do that?")
3. Context established, hook in place, continue with the how-to screenshots, technical details, email signup.
Kudos again for the neat project. You may have just sold me a 4S, too!
- qrush 15y agoThanks nz, I too was trying to "get it", and I wanted to see if others would too. Definitely could use some clarification and I'll continue to refine the concept...once I get it in the hands of some more folks.