I think that's a fair critique. It's not a perfect execution, and there are some distractions in it. I still think, however, that the user experience is novel a

I think that's a fair critique. It's not a perfect execution, and there are some distractions in it. I still think, however, that the user experience is novel and interesting, and that it has a great thematic consonance with the subject matter. If I were launching an e-book, for instance, I might use something like this page as a demo of sorts.