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While the back story is pretty good, please learn to tell it better, the writing was awkward.
by ovi256 15y ago
While the back story is pretty good, please learn to tell it better, the writing was awkward.
- kingsidharth 15y agoHow can I improve it?
- ovi256 15y agoI'm no writer, so I can't give precise advice, sorry. OTOH, if I put you off writing even a tiny bit by my criticism, that was a huge mistake, please write more! Writing more will make you better.