Am I the only one who found this incredibly - hard is the wrong word but - annoying to read? If it weren't for all the parentheticals, I'd say this reads like

Am I the only one who found this incredibly - hard is the wrong word but - annoying to read? If it weren't for all the parentheticals, I'd say this reads like extemporaneous speech passed through some very poor speech to text software. There's typos, missing words, spell-corrected words, and far too many unnecessary words. Not saying I disagree with the content, which is thoughtful and worth the read, but the execution hurt the reception quite a bit. I'm one to talk though, this comment is the most I've written for public consumption in weeks if not months, and sometimes quantity is a form of quality when it comes to writing. That being said, editing is a skill of its own.