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How I lost my business at the age of 11
- ovi256 15y agoWhile the back story is pretty good, please learn to tell it better, the writing was awkward.
- kingsidharth 15y agoHow can I improve it?
- ovi256 15y agoI'm no writer, so I can't give precise advice, sorry. OTOH, if I put you off writing even a tiny bit by my criticism, that was a huge mistake, please write more! Writing more will make you better.