> Headline + Bullet Points are far quicker to convey useful information Not sure why the quicker qualification, here. Your example follows the article's guide

> Headline + Bullet Points are far quicker to convey useful information Not sure why the quicker qualification, here. Your example follows the article's guidelines exactly. (Except, as a minor point, the initial character is upper-case). In fact, if each of the bullets were its own commit, this would be the default message of the squash-commit to master.