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This shouldn't take more than 5min: I would love it if you could go to boardgamecalendar.com and tell me one thing I could do to make the product or my descrip

• mikegreenberg 15y ago
  Keep the following text: This calendar features creative photographs uploaded by the community at BoardGameGeek.com. 54 pages. One for each week. Remove everything else. People understand calendars. They know how they work. Instead, put a BIG INTERACTIVE demo letting users flip through the calendar to look at pictures. Under the text, place a large PURCHASE button. Add the newsletter signup underneath if you must. But it really should offered after they make their purchase. Make it exclusive! ;) Bonus points: Insert easter egg appointments in the calendar for ridiculous things like "Catanadians Anonymous @ 8pm (BRING BEER)". Just an idea. UPDATE: So it looks like this is a test and the product has not been produced yet. And from the looks of your blog, you've spent a decent amount of time to get to this point. So I didn't mean to cut what you created to shreds. There is absolutely nothing wrong with this page, especially if it's generating cash. However, something needs to be said for conveying a simple message. "I have a calendar. The pictures might be of interest to you. Come and buy it from me." Adding all of the additional text is a distraction from what you want your visitors to do. If they want to buy it, they will. Additional pictures may entice them to dwell on the thought a bit longer. Additional text might do the same thing. But I believe that people prefer visual candy to reading more often than not. That's the main reason behind my suggestion. Hope the explanation helps.