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Disclaimer: I’m working on a micro fiction app. Ironically, Justin’s argument gets lost in repetitive rhetoric. Not that repeating an idea for emphasis is bad
by throwaway284534 4y ago
Disclaimer: I’m working on a micro fiction app.
Ironically, Justin’s argument gets lost in repetitive rhetoric. Not that repeating an idea for emphasis is bad per se — I personally lost interest at the 60% mark once I got the gist of it.
He’s right though. Books are often purchased like mementos to signal the ideals you’d like to be associated with. And to add to the irony, Justin may be inadvertently writing his book for the same reasons. It’s fun to be thought of as a published author, to escape the 9-5, and to do something passionate for a living.
Personally, I don’t have much of an attention span for long form, so I can sympathize with my own readers. I took it as feedback to rework my book into a ADHD friendly format.[1]
I want stories that have a true sense of time between pages, character dialogue that feels like more than text on a page, and exposition that has a verisimilitude rivaling a movie.
…But not everyone wants that. Some authors want to publish books the way they’ve always been written. I just wouldn’t be surprised if finding dedicated readers gets harder every year.
[1] (NSFW) https://hugbox.biz/story/is-that-me/the-girl-in-the-mirror/ https://hugbox.biz/story/is-that-me/the-girl-in-the-mirror/
- pessimizer 4y agoYou mistook the first thing that he wrote as the thing the entire essay was about, and you mistook the development of the first thing he wrote into his larger argument as repetitions of the first thing he wrote. Not an essay on how cool it is to have books, or how pretentious it is to have books.
- throwaway284534 4y agoRespectfully, I disagree and I don’t believe this article is written well. An entire essay cannot stand in for a thesis statement, or at least not without disregarding the reader’s time. I think what especially frustrates me about this article is that there are good portions. Justin makes some good points that would do well with another round of editing.
- paulclinger 4y agoInteresting idea, but I think this is too short (and page transitions take longer than reading of each page). BTW, on p5: s/who’s/whose/ in "who’s room is this".
- throwaway284534 4y agoThanks for taking a look through! I appreciate the feedback. I'll disable to page transitions for now, especially since they're poorly supported on iOS anyway.