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Hi Mike! Thanks for displaying such unselfishness and support. It's really people like you who begin making a difference. If you don't mind, I'd like to get s

Hi Mike! Thanks for displaying such unselfishness and support. It's really people like you who begin making a difference. If you don't mind, I'd like to get some feedback for the landing page http://grooovy.me http://grooovy.me . If this is something that you might be interested in, signups would be appreciated. It would also help immensely if you can spread the word about us in any way you can! Again, thank you for taking the time out to do this. You're amazing.

mikegreenberg 15y ago
Sure thing.... thoughts on the homepage: - Nitpick: The text left of the iPhone on Windows and Ubuntu is not vertically centered on the band. I realize the headings line up horizontally, but my OCD is still itching. (Chrome 14 on both.) - Nitpick: The active (blue) circle under the text to the right of the iPhone is just a pixel or two too low. (Again on both Ubuntu and Windows w/ Chrome 14.) - Further Nitpick: On sliding the homepage over a few times, I feel this color band across the back of the page is causing my OCD more problems than text alignment. Maybe find another way to put a splash of color on the page. Or make it more subtle. - I almost missed that I could slide the homepage over with the arrow, BTW. - I see the clever active email request form built into the iPhone demo on step 2, but it'll probably get missed by the majority. Especially when there's no reason to believe that anything is active in the demo area. (Even with arrows.) - You mention a video in Step 4 but I see no video link anywhere.... ???? - Do you track to see how many people get through to the end? Putting your "RSVP" request only at the beginning and end (and hidden in step 2), you risk missing conversions in the intermediate steps. I'd find a way to ask for that RSVP on every screen. Overall, the layout and walkthrough is nice and give users something to look at if they're really interested. Nice work and easy on the eyes. I'm not an iPhone guy so I can't help you there. Dropped a tweet for you because of the decent execution here!

mikegreenberg 15y ago

Sure thing.... thoughts on the homepage: - Nitpick: The text left of the iPhone on Windows and Ubuntu is not vertically centered on the band. I realize the headings line up horizontally, but my OCD is still itching. (Chrome 14 on both.) - Nitpick: The active (blue) circle under the text to the right of the iPhone is just a pixel or two too low. (Again on both Ubuntu and Windows w/ Chrome 14.) - Further Nitpick: On sliding the homepage over a few times, I feel this color band across the back of the page is causing my OCD more problems than text alignment. Maybe find another way to put a splash of color on the page. Or make it more subtle. - I almost missed that I could slide the homepage over with the arrow, BTW. - I see the clever active email request form built into the iPhone demo on step 2, but it'll probably get missed by the majority. Especially when there's no reason to believe that anything is active in the demo area. (Even with arrows.) - You mention a video in Step 4 but I see no video link anywhere.... ???? - Do you track to see how many people get through to the end? Putting your "RSVP" request only at the beginning and end (and hidden in step 2), you risk missing conversions in the intermediate steps. I'd find a way to ask for that RSVP on every screen. Overall, the layout and walkthrough is nice and give users something to look at if they're really interested. Nice work and easy on the eyes. I'm not an iPhone guy so I can't help you there. Dropped a tweet for you because of the decent execution here!