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You 'buried the lead' in the html head title tag -- "Create friendships in 5 steps" isn't on any of the pages. You might consider a condensed version that has
by mjs00 15y ago
You 'buried the lead' in the html head title tag -- "Create friendships in 5 steps" isn't on any of the pages.
You might consider a condensed version that has the 5 steps on one page, with just the headings (not all the explanation text), and the call to action.
This seems more like a guided tour for someone that wants more information, when you've perhaps got their interest, it will be great for that on your launched website. Even then, you might want to change "step 1" to "step 1 of 5", etc, to let them know it isn't open-ended, and maybe emphasize your 5 step value proposition.
- iamjonlee 15y agoFantastic advice. Never thought about the step 1 of 5 at all. I was hoping that the "Join and Create Events" paragraph would have sufficed for the condensed version with all 5 steps. I was running out of space in the design as I decided to provide support for 1024x768 browsers. I'll make a note of the html title tag- nice catch. Thanks for your feedback!
- mjs00 15y ago>I was hoping ... OK, I can see that now -- I think as highlighted points instead of a paragraph, this would be clearer. And "Grooovy - Create Friendships in 5 Steps" is more impactful and piques more interest (my opinion) as a headline than "Grooovy Lets You Meet New Friends Comfortably at Your Own Pace." Good luck!