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I found it hard to tell which words were and were not part of proper nouns, and which were organizations or things and which were people, in this headline. It r

I found it hard to tell which words were and were not part of proper nouns, and which were organizations or things and which were people, in this headline. It reads like gibberish.

chockchocschoir 5y ago
As is common when someone is not familiar with an industry or concept, titles become hard to read. To help you, I have made the names in italics and then even you could maybe understand this title. > Cronje Quits Crypto, Abandons Fantom, Yearn Finance Speaking about titles, what do you think about this one? > Enhanced Cycling Stability of Macroporous Bulk Antimony‐Based Sodium‐Ion Battery Anodes Enabled through Active/Inactive Composites How am I (or you), a person who have no experience in whatever the subject is about, supposed to know what it is about?! Absolute gibberish! Or maybe, a title is written for people who are actually in that industry?
- duped 5y ago
  The second is much easier to read as a layperson because it contains punctuation, articles, and prepositions.
- brimble 5y ago
  Your example is much easier to parse, and I know far less about that than about the industry in the HN title.