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You're too focused on external factors outside of your control. Your landing page, frankly, has an offer that almost nobody will want. Your headline amounts to
by boplicity 5y ago
You're too focused on external factors outside of your control. Your landing page, frankly, has an offer that almost nobody will want. Your headline amounts to "let me send you snail mail," which is not compelling in any way. If I clicked on an ad to buy snail mail, it would probably be on accident. I'd quickly press the back button.
I'm not trying to be harsh here, but the reality is that very few people will buy, based on your offer, unless they already know and like you in some way.
In addition, many of the things you're offering are avaiable for free, online, in a digital format, or from bigger companies with large budgets, in magazine formats. It's not clear what sets you apart, or why it would be worth parting with my hard earned money.
You're asking people for their money -- but you're landing page copy needs a lot of work. That is the problem you're running into.
Before having a successful advertising campaign, you will have to spend a lot of time iterating and testing different offers, to see what works and what doesn't. That's the stage you're at right now.
- Graffur 5y agoI liked the homepage and the only reason I am not subscribing to the "Globetrotter prepaid 12 months" plan is that I don't have kids yet. This is such a good idea imo.