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Thank you for your feedback! Are you a copywriter? I really like how you rewrote all of the original sentences. Based on your comments and other feedback I hav
by robbiejs 5y ago
Thank you for your feedback! Are you a copywriter? I really like how you rewrote all of the original sentences.
Based on your comments and other feedback I have received in this thread I have decided to take the page offline and put back a simple comparison table page later. I might re-introduce the article text after I have rewritten it in a more neutral tone of voice, like in your examples. Thank you!
- BizarroLand 5y agoI am not a copywriter but I've worked doing a lot of websites for larger companies and this is the kind of spiel that they would use to limit their liability when discussing their products. Present your product in the best possible light without lying about it. If there are stark measurable differences between you and a competitor and you can record and validate them, (i.e., DataGridXL can parse this common operation on 100,000 table rows in X seconds, which is Y% faster than HandsonTable on the same machine!), that is perfectly fine. (Use OBS Studio to video the results and save it, and should they take you to court you can use it to prove that you did not lie one Jot or one Iota.) It's only Libel if it is false, so if you know it is not false and can prove it, then you're in the clear, but smack talk can and will get you smacked down in court. Also, it might be a good idea to also compare your software to a third product if you can find one that you also outclass. That shows a touch of impartiality so that it doesn't read as if you're picking on HandsonTable. If not, that's ok, but it's an idea worth considering.
- robbiejs 5y agoThat is valuable feedback. I'm screenshotting this post and will be rereading it before I start redoing the article. Thank you!