While I admire your commitment to practicing what you preach, I can't help but think that you've taken it further than it's meant to go, though in a way that's

While I admire your commitment to practicing what you preach, I can't help but think that you've taken it further than it's meant to go, though in a way that's hard to place. But it feels ... abrupt. Offensively effusive. A stream of emphatic points without a break.