I agree. There's a big difference between simplifying writing and just omitting all the details. The example translation is almost all detail-omitting and very

I agree. There's a big difference between simplifying writing and just omitting all the details. The example translation is almost all detail-omitting and very little simplification. How much detail is appropriate depends on your audience; it's not a clear win to just omit all details. Otherwise I can simplify their example even more: > Kyra has problems.