Not just is it not especially insightful, I'm finding the prose a little hard to get through. Granted, this is presentation and not content, but my complaint a

Not just is it not especially insightful, I'm finding the prose a little hard to get through. Granted, this is presentation and not content, but my complaint are the sort of thing a decent editor ought to clean up: there's all sorts of syntax oddities and typos. It almost doesn't feel like native English