This is how we were taught at university on my (photo)journalism course, it's used by newspapers very effectively, e.g. "Dad, 42, saved a four-year-old on Habe

This is how we were taught at university on my (photo)journalism course, it's used by newspapers very effectively, e.g. "Dad, 42, saved a four-year-old on Haberdashery High Street this afternoon by pulling him out of the way of an oncoming bus" Who, what, where, when, how, why. Dad, saves child, on the high street, this arvo, pulls him to safety, because he's a dad and that's someone's kid. The first line and paragraph tells you everything you need to be drawn into the story.