It would be improved by changing the framing from a discussion to singular persons internal dialogue showing progression and train of thought. I’ve used this

It would be improved by changing the framing from a discussion to singular persons internal dialogue showing progression and train of thought. I’ve used this before in a work context to explain complex debugging issues. “Hmm that doesn’t work, what about X” <code> “Oh but that didn’t do what I wanted. What if we added Y and Z” <code>