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I agree, but I know some people who like this style. Personally I want the gory technical details. This reads like those recipe sites that give you an unneces
by bravetraveler 5y ago
I agree, but I know some people who like this style.
Personally I want the gory technical details. This reads like those recipe sites that give you an unnecessary life backstory.
The gore may be less approachable, but I'd say the overall effort to understanding the material is less.
- toyg 5y agoThe style can work. In this case it largely doesn't, mostly because the writer insists in trying to be cute about "Tim". Tim is a sockpuppet for the author, like Socrates in Plato's works. After the first couple of paragraphs, there is no point pretending he is anything but that. Trying to flesh him out, over and over through the text, is a waste of everyone's time.