The author basically says "Don't prize victimhood because rich kids are better at playing the victimhood game than poor kids." I would have liked it better if

The author basically says "Don't prize victimhood because rich kids are better at playing the victimhood game than poor kids." I would have liked it better if he had said, "Don't prize victimhood because it is not the job of universities (or employers) to attempt to right the cruel turns of fate that life deals to each one of us."