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ed209's Feedback. I haven't thought much about the concept, so I won't comment on that. Regarding the design, it doesn't really say 'dinner party' to me. A go
by dgunn 15y ago
ed209's Feedback.
I haven't thought much about the concept, so I won't comment on that.
Regarding the design, it doesn't really say 'dinner party' to me.
A good way to start is to look at google images for 'dinner party' http://www.google.de/search?q=dinner+party&hl=en&biw.. http://www.google.de/search?q=dinner+party&hl=en&biw....
• I would have 4 or 6 larger dinner party images as a background
• I would change the tag line from "Eat with your neighbors!" to something more like "Make great friends right next door" - so sell the outcome, not the literal act
• colours are not bad, just think food
• this is actually your selling point "meet great people, eat amazing food, and you'll always have a lot of fun"
- mhd 15y agoI'd agree with the call for pictures. Either something rather neutral and abstract (50s style silhouettes and line drawing) or some actual images – preferably not just middle-class white people (social networks also need upper-class hipsters…). Also, I think it's mandatory to mention the word "foodie" at least once.
- dgunn 15y agoThanks for the feedback. We agree about the pics and had been toying with the idea a little. We're working now on a way to integrate some into the landing page.