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Let me say something about what you wrote. You're not telling us what you're thinking, or you're telling us something without thinking about it. What you poste
by godDLL 5y ago
Let me say something about what you wrote.
You're not telling us what you're thinking, or you're telling us something without thinking about it. What you posted reads like a collection of ideas and not an argument of any kind. The quality of individual constituents in that above collection seems suspect as well.
An argument might go something like: hypothesis, supporting evidence, prediction, theory, course of action.
What you wrote reads something like: prescription, direction, story, conjecture, prediction, dismissal of example to the contrary, proposed emotional response.