I agree with everything you say, and I agree that the proposed revision in that section is a lot better than the original. I just disagree with the claim that t

I agree with everything you say, and I agree that the proposed revision in that section is a lot better than the original. I just disagree with the claim that the fact that they're closed on Tuesdays is unimportant. It's extremely important, and any good design should communicate this unambiguously.