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Article reads like it was written by a child who's just discovered adverbs, or at the very least is bring paid to promote them by Big Adverb. The tone of those
by oliwarner 5y ago
Article reads like it was written by a child who's just discovered adverbs, or at the very least is bring paid to promote them by Big Adverb.
The tone of those adverbs is also entirely unnecessary. We already understand: Child sex abuse isn't nice! You don't need to label his every action as diabolical, stomach-churning, and horrifying. Certainly not all within a few sentences of each other.
I hope this isn't the future of science writing.