I agree with @isotarical. Instead of using adjectives that you'd find in gamer subs on reddit, it would sound more professional and less condescending if you we

I agree with @isotarical. Instead of using adjectives that you'd find in gamer subs on reddit, it would sound more professional and less condescending if you were more specific i.e. use the stuff you have in your comparison matrix as the talking point That said, marketing is really hard, and you're still doing a better job than me.