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Reading the three main boxes, I had no idea what you were talking about. 1. "We manage your events...": Ok, so it helps me plan parties and meet-ups and stuff?
by jmah 15y ago
Reading the three main boxes, I had no idea what you were talking about.
1. "We manage your events...": Ok, so it helps me plan parties and meet-ups and stuff? Facebook, Twitter, Gmail icons: Right, these must be how I can manage invitations and attendance.
2. "Get smart and precise[d] recommendations...": Recommendations for what? Similar meet-ups I can attend? But I thought it's for planning the event, so maybe venues and catering?
3. "We can help you complete our recommendations...": That doesn't tell me anything. I still think it's like Anyvite.
Then I read the lower blurb (which is better):
"Diglig is a context-aware, virtual personal assistant and do engine."
Does "do engine" mean anything to anyone else? I have no idea.
"Diglig manages your events at one centralized location and anticipates which tasks you’ll need to complete before your next event."
My idea from before was reinforced: I have tasks like "book venue", "order catering", "create seating chart", and you'll help me with those.
"Diglig then assists you in doing our recommendations, whether it is booking a flight & hotel for your next meeting, making a dinner reservations or getting a gift for that special someone."
Hmm. This is the first time I feel like it's not about planning a single event. So maybe it's attaching tasks to the events in my calendar. Can I suggest you use a word like "appointment", because "event" sounds large and once-off.
"At Diglig we believe that everyone should have a virtual assistant to which they can delegate their tasks."
Oh, I can delegate my tasks. So now it sounds like not just an app, but a service with real people as assistants (where "virtual" means "not in person", NOT "digital"). But I have no idea if this interpretation is correct, as it's hard to get a consistent description of what you're trying to do.
So what DO you do? Then I can help with some wording, if you like.