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The Yes You Can doesn't do it for me. It is confusing as for the first two blocks 'yes' and 'you' are/can be used to start the sentence of, while the third one
by sjaakkkkk 15y ago
The Yes You Can doesn't do it for me. It is confusing as for the first two blocks 'yes' and 'you' are/can be used to start the sentence of, while the third one isn't. Also when glancing at the page the slogan doesn't give you any information of what I can do. I suggest making informative headings. Also spelling events with a capitalized E is a bit weird to me -- try to emphasize it in a different way. Also - I don't know how this is for an english native american - but for me 'yes you can' makes me think of the Obama yes we can slogan, which might be a turnoff for republican visitors of your website. Furthermore, the horizontal alignment is off for those three words and text, that makes it look messy (and maybe don't center-align it, but left-align it to increase readability).
Additionally, personally I prefer social media logo's to be their original logo's so they stand out more from you design.
On the whole, I don't really like the blue color in combination with the grey/white elements, it looks kinda 2004ish or something. Lastly, I think the email signup is below the fold for 1280 resolutions, you might wanna make sure it is visible immediately for those resolutions as well.
- gdhillon 15y agosjaakkkkk, thanks for the valuable feedback. we'll be making changes in next few days.