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I like the over-all look and feel of the page. However, it's flaws IMHO are numerous. I'm going to go from top-left to bottom-right, since it's safe to assume y
by aculver 15y ago
I like the over-all look and feel of the page. However, it's flaws IMHO are numerous. I'm going to go from top-left to bottom-right, since it's safe to assume your visitors will do the same.
Social media links should be at the bottom of the page. They are a type of call-to-action and having folks click on them is a type of conversion. Ask them to make that decision after figuring out what your app is about.
I like the layout of the product shot on the left, but the scaling is all wrong. It looks blurry.
Your tagline should give people a general idea of what your app does.
Clicking a link to a blog article should not be the main conversion on this page. I also shouldn't have to read the blog article to understand what your app does. Instead, this page should have already taught me as much as I need to know about your app to determine whether I want to keep updated on it's progress. If I do, you should be taking my email address at this point.
After reading all the copy on the page, I still don't have any idea what the app does.
I hope that helps. :)
- iamjonlee 15y agoYour feedback was really helpful! I'll look into the social media links and rearrange the layout a little better. I'm relatively new at photoshop so didn't know how to tilt the image the same way as the iphone template. I'll just use a normal iphone image instead of trying to tilt it. I've changed the tagline to "Connecting at your own pace" by your recommendation-thanks I agree that the link to the blog article shouldn't be the main convo on this page. I'll change it out and clarify what the app really does.